🔎 RR#21 – Do this just before your “big payoff”

Hey Reader,

It’s nearly time for the weekend!

Tell me you’ve got that Friday Feeling too?

I hope you’re not gonna make me crack out the Daniel Craig GIF.

I don’t want to!

I don’t.

Oh alright:

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Scriptwriting tip of the week

Somehow, I always end up procrastinating writing the hook.

It just feels too important and I get scared 😅

But, if you can break it down and think of it in simple terms, it’s way easier to write something that resonates with your audience…

George Blackman @GeorgeBlackman_ Struggling with writing your intro? See if you can break it down and re-write it like this: 1 – These are the characters. 2 – This is the concept. 3 – Here’s what’s at stake. In the first 10s, clarity is everything. April 26th 2023 5 Retweets 83 Likes

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How do you approach writing your intro? Hit reply and let me know! ✍️

Here are this week’s retention reviews…

Video #1

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In this review:
​How to make your audience resonate emotionally with your content.

Make your next edit less painful 😫

Wanna save a ton of time on the boring, repetitive tasks that pop up in every single edit?

Cutting the “ums” and “ahs” is one thing, but what about trawling through your 17 bad takes before you find “the one”?

BORED.

Gling is a nifty little tool made specifically for YouTubers that does all that for you.

(Yes, it even detects and removes bad takes 😱)

It’s literally only $5 per video, but if you fancy trying it first…

Use the code “RETENTION” for a free month, on me 😏

Yep, I’m In!

If you’re still not sure, check out the video below to see it in action…

Video #2

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In this review:
​The problem that befalls most creators who speak “off the cuff”.

Video #3

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In this review:
​The critical thing that needs to happen right before your “big payoff”.

That’s all for now! I’m going away for a week, so I may be a little slow at replying (but I shall miss you dearly, of course!).

Speak soon,

George 👋