May 10th, 2024
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There's a rule I always follow when writing a YouTube hook:
If in doubt, keep it simple 👇
(Bookmark this article - my simple, 3-step hook formula.)
But, if we look closely, it's easy to spot the little extra sauce the biggest YouTubers use to keep us hooked.
So this week, I studied Ryan Trahan.
And I discovered the cheeky psychological trick you can steal that'll hook viewers for longer (in 6 simple steps).
For this demo, we'll break down the hook of I Stayed in Every Hotel at Disney World...
"Disney World claims to be the most magical place on Earth."
Other examples of “context” sentences:
Simply introduce the audience to the topic.
[B-Roll from Ryan's visit.] "Not only are the theme parks unbelievable but there are dozens of hotels at Disney that seem like fairy tales..."
Other examples of “proof”:
Your “proof” can be entirely visual. Get a good shot that proves you did the thing.
"This week I'm going to every single Disney World hotel to investigate."
Other examples of “structure”:
This is closely related to step 5, but we need to complete step 4 first.
"And guess who I'm bringing? A girl. A girl that says we don't have enough photos together."
Other examples of “motivation”:
Give your video emotional weight, either for the involved characters (entertainment), or for the viewer (educational).
"So my plan is simple. I take her to the most magical place on Earth - Orlando Florida, home of Disney World. And, every day, capture a magical moment that we bring home to frame."
Other examples of “plan”:
It's ok to add more detail to the concept once the audience understands your "why".
"And Haley doesn't know this, but I'm really trying to book the room inside of the Magic Kingdom Castle, which is nearly impossible by the way."
Other examples of "setting up" the payoff:
Think - what's going to get your audience really curious?
Remember - you don't have to stick to the same order as Ryan. Simply try to include all 6 elements.
Oh, one last thing...
Ever wondered what multi-million sub YouTubers are actually like in person?
Are they driven? Introverted? Strategically lazy?!
Having worked with a tonne of huge YouTubers for the last 2 years, Gwilym, Jamie and I discussed the traits we've spotted time and time again 👇
That's all for this week. Any questions, just let me know :)
Speak soon,
George 👋
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